//TODO: today

still not remotely done with this game, but so far i've really enjoyed this game. it's inclusive and gives you a little break from life with a character that goes through things that almost everyone deals with on a daily basis. unique art style and good colouring. i'm definitely enjoying this so far.

Good game, excellent art. All the images and scenarios with intense colors that draw you into the scene. The story is good and I'm sure it resonates with many of our situations, even if you're not in the arts but in programming, writing, etc. This game shows us that a dream is a dream and you don't necessarily need to cling to it at all costs, but rather seek other alternatives that bring you happiness along life's journey. But most importantly, don't fall back into the dark holes that life will throw your way and overcome everything with all your might and strength. Or at least that's how I see it. In conclusion, this is a very good game. Just a heads up, English isn't my first language, so sorry if anything is a bit off!

...questionable character design, pronounce choices, all characters living in a safe-space echo-chamber... another western game, eh? Made by 14yo "non-binary" girl? Nothing changes in this world.. Gen z might not know, but in outr time we had our "non-binary" too, it was called "emo" and "goth" - they also had flags/colors, were screaming "mom it's not a phase", etc. But then they grew up.

i remember playing this game years ago. i absolutely adored it and after a bit of replaying it, i still do. thank you for making this game

Welp, I fell in love with an AI.

this game is SO good. the art is good, the story is good, the main lead is hella relatable in their existential dread, what else could a girl want?? and i cant believe it's actually FREE for this level of quality. i spent a good few hours just getting through the phoenix route and i'm sure there's many more still!

Omg this is amazing. I'd pay for a game like this. The quality is so high.

Loved it! Joyce is the most loveable adorable little man

i fell in love with zen

omg i love this game!! it's so well made and your choices really have impact on the story. it is one of the best otome games i ever played. also i loved how the main character change through the game. 

Oh. My. Fucking. God. This was AMAZING!!! It's so jampacked with stuff and everything is obviously made with love??? I loved all the characters, the music was so good omfg if it's not on spotify already?? and the art is just GORGEOUS!! I usually make more serious reviews but this is just too good for that. I haven't even 100% the game yet but i am SO going to do that.

I was thinking of writing a long winded comment like I often do for VNs I absolutely love but I want to make this one shorter since it's late at night and I just finished the VN (got most of the achievements and assumed what the other three I didn't get would be about, but just didn't have the heart to lose the competition when Teal really wanted to win or to not save Joyce), and I loved it. 

The concept itself caught my eye immediately and I thought it was well explored without going into details that might be too odd for the player. I liked how well thought out the art and programming sections were because they felt like they were written by professionals in that field not just a random writer (I'm sure the developers have both a large amount of art experience and experience with tech or programming considering how professional and technical it all sounded, though I'm neither in art nor programming).

I also think it was a great choice that we got to pick pronouns, sexuality and Teal's look. While I find any kind of story interesting regardless of sexuality or gender of the characters if it's a good story, I still have a strong preference for wlw stories and I was happy with the ability to choose. I loved the minor changes that came with picking different pronouns and sexuality preferences, it felt seamlessly cut into the story. Also, and this isn't anything specifically related to the story but the designs for female Phoenix and Joyce are really pretty and I enjoyed spending time with them, they were just really nice to look at! I saw a comment that said that the male version of Phoenix looks like a K-Pop idol and I cannot unsee it now lmao

I absolutely loved Teal's backstory, problems with motivation, isolation, procrastination and so on were very interesting to tackle and I liked the way Joyce's advice and support, as well as Teal's other choices played into that. I liked that there was something deeper to all the characters, which I can't always say for VNs like this (especially VNs with romantic options).

I wish the writing were a bit more polished in terms of grammar, punctuation and vocabulary. It's not a horrible mistake but it's one that gets me to skim over the text so I don't have to read through the somewhat basic sounding text (punctuation was especially bad). Noticing these grammatical errors is probably more of a me thing since I'm a text editor but still. 

Anyway great VN overall! I'm excited to see what else this studio has to offer! 

The eye-catching visuals made me want to try this game, I'm so glad I did! A lot of Teal's experiences were relatable. I wish my younger and more introverted self had stumbled upon this sooner lol

Cute & heartwarming, I feel motivated to give it my all after playing 💪

Absolutely loved this game. The story was so much fun but also so interesting ... made me self-reflect a lot. Also Joyce is an absolute sweetheart.

that was hell of an experience, i didnt expect this to be that long for being a game made for a Jam but im not complaining, came here for Joyce and stayed here for Joyce xd

the only thing i wish could be better were more bonding scenes for Joyce. I mean, i saw there were a lot more opportunities you could spend with Phoenix just casually talking, hanging out and having fun but for Joyce, even though we are with them more than Phoenix, we never really have that much opportunities to just have fun, closer bonding moments or some noteworthy moments (you know besides them giving pep talks and life advices)? After entering a relationship with them, it would've been nice if we had at least 1 romantic/bonding scene with interaction before the ending or as the epilogue. Like idk, I haven't tried to pursue Phoenix yet so I don't know how they are in comparison. For my first gameplay i tried to just focus on Joyce (such as not hanging out with Phoenix given the opportunity) and also keeping in mind of my other problems (working and drawing) but it felt like majority of my moments with them was just about the art competition. I don't know if staying home from work or not focusing on drawing so much wouldve given some more bonding scenes with Joyce but yeah... I just didn't feel as close to Joyce as Joyce felt about MC when they confessed. I also wish we could've heard a "I love you" from Joyce too T_T. Anyway, this won't be my last gameplay tho :')

This game made me want to get back to drawing aswell, I haven't drawn digitally for a while but I feel like drawing something... I'd love to draw something of Joy or/and Phoenix >-<

Just replayed it, and finally realized the impact this game had on me. Even though I already knew the routes and endings, the emotional sections still sort of got to me. If I could give a higher rating, I would do it in a heartbeat. I look forward to any new games in the future and wish you good fortune!

this is really fun!

okay where do I start...I absolutely am IN LOVE with the game, it is so sweet and heart-warming! Will absolutely play this time and time again!! Thank you to the creators for taking their time and making this amazing game <3

okay but the doc martins in the corner of phoenix's room-

with the cuffed jeans-

and belt-

aLSO THE SEVEN DEADLY EXES REFERENCE PLS-

i loved this game! i just went thru and got the teal and phoenix endings and I'm def going back for the joyce ending. this game was so relaxing and fun to play! i also really enjoyed the message about working hard to have the life u want, it really resonated w/ me since I try to follow a similar lifestyle. thank u for making this amazing game! 

This game is so wonderful!!!! I love the art style and the story is engaging. I haven't finished my storyline yet but I'm in love.

hahahahahaaaa, i lived my silly little life, i worked at the silly little bookstore, i won the silly little art contest, and then i went back to zen's route and realized i coudl do CRIMES?? omg replaying this asap

Thank you for making the amazing game Developers. I loved every minute of it. The art style was amazing. The freedom to be and like (or not like) whoever you want is awesome. And finally managed to get the last achievement on it : Homelessness. Luckily I had Joyce in that playthrough. I can't just leave my characters in a bad situation. Still lovely premise. Maybe I'll check out the rest of your games. Phoenix and Joyce and Teal endings were the only ones I got.

came back to say i just noticed the fire emblem poster on teal's wall and somehow i'm even more in love with this game than i was before

Amazing game! <3

Such an adorable and wholesome game! I really enjoyed playing it; thank youuuuu (and the fact that i've always been obsessed with AIs helped a lot!) <33

I stumbled upon //TODO: today during the biggest art block of my life. This game helped me a lot and I really appreciate it! Many of Teal's struggles really resonated with me! Thank you guys so much for creating this great game! <:

First things first. I got so hooked on this game the first play through took me around 6 hours and man was it worth it. I loved all the cute anime references, considering I lost interest in it a while ago it was pretty nostalgic especially seeing the first manga I ever finished referenced. The colour scheme was also one of the most refreshing things I've ever seen in a visual novel. The way it contrasted the topics tackled was pretty smart in its own way, kinda like an upbeat song with sad lyrics. Honestly the thing I loved the most was the way the story line coincidentally somewhat mirrored my current situation.

I'll definitely be playing this again for the rest of the achievements.

I dont think I can properly say how much i genuinly love this game!! From the writting, to the art, to the gui itself, the game was amazing! This was the first time where I related to a character so much, i felt what they did on a personal level. Teal and Phoenix's characters really spoke to me b/c somehow I managed to be the same way as both of them. Where I don't feel good enough in my art and try to figure things out on my own, to where I work too much for something and in the end wonder if I wasted my time. I'm not gonna lie, I really almost cried and some points because of the genuine sound advice that was said in the game. Even though its just a game, I really did appreciate the things that were said and I really want to apply the advice Joyce & Teal said on to my own life. :)

Aw yes this so great, and I love how you written protag and the story!! Also bonus for options hooray! The art is lovely, I love the inclusion of their different styles too- that was a nice touch! (and thanks for giving me flashbacks for my art classes that ignited my flight or fight response yay :) )

This is such a cute game uwu. It was very relatable but also had such cute graphics that kept me interested, to anyone who is thinking of playing, please do and good luck and hope you enjoy playing! :D

Nice graphics!

gosh it's a shame i can't romance zen